thanks
I appreciate the effort but I can't use this, it is just not interesteng. Next time you write an article, try and picture like if you are publishing it on your blog, it could help.
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csteam 2012-08-29
No Spinning of article
poor wording, does not read well
Last paragraph could have used a bit more work. Overall it was good.
There are some grammar mistakes!
good
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imnoy6 2012-08-26
Key wordddd
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Great quality!
The English is not great and the material didn't really target bodybuilding so much as it just talked about working out.
Content low value
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veepal 2012-08-24
Well done! Thanks!
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boling 2012-08-21
poor quality
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boling 2012-08-21
Thanks...
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veepal 2012-08-21
Good work
Great job!
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rstock 2012-08-17
Basically good...a little choppy try and stay away from big words keep it simple.
Delete 4th paragraph since it has some unsubstantiated claims. Replace with one line "Consult your doctor before taking any supplements". The paragraph on sports supplements should not state steroids. No controversial claims here.
Love the first 3 paragraphs. For 4th para, just stating "please consult your physician before taking supplements" should suffice. For 5th para, remove claims about steroids, etc. Need a non-controversial article for light reading. Please resend.
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