This article is not what I was after, there are lots of mistakes where the article has been scraped and it doesn't make sense. It also lists another website that is not mine. Sorry this one is not for me. Dan. 

The article is not very well structured and the placement of words isn't correct. For example, "...it's time to start thinking about Christmas decorating ideas beautiful." 

This is not a review of the game. It is completely off topic. You have not followed the instructions. Sorry but I have option but to reject this article. 

 

 

 

A good article thanks 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is a great article with great content. But, too many grammar errors. Considered re-writing. Sorry. 

 

Thank you for a very nice re-write. 

Very nice re-write, thank you. 

Not professional tone. 'Awesome' and such words are not professional. The article was a drag out of a few thoughts not well constructed with no flow or rythem.