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kaizenify 2012-07-30 for
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Kowloon, Hong Kong Restaurants
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johnwarmann 2012-07-30 for
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Making the Most Out of a PPC Agency
Very good article, thank you. Your style is also wonderful.
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dealsopoly 2012-07-30 for
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Three Effective COPD Breathing Exercises
Thank you. Good article
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WriterGirl89 2012-07-30 for
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What Is Elliptical Equipment And Its Benefits For Fitness?
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TuNguyen 2012-07-29 for
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Making the Most Out of Your Promotional Code Miss Selfridge Offers
Some of the sentences do not make sense and do not link together very well. For example the one about "petite selection", which is not really an English retail term.
Overall the article is fine, so please fix these issues and resubmit. Thanks!
Responded with comment: We will work on it
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alexrjr 2012-07-28 for
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What companies should implement a good marketing strategy
Thank you.
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FourWays 2012-07-27 for
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How to Leave a Review on TripAdvisor
Before writing, please read the project details. I was searching for a french article ilustrated with images.
Responded with comment: Sir we never found where it said anything about french. I thought is was a good article but I read the instructions and saw nothing about french.I feel that I wrote this article in good faith but reading the instructions there is nothing about french
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ecomsolutions 2012-07-26 for
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How to Make Delicious BBQ Ribs For the Crowd
Poor grammar
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amtsales 2012-07-26 for
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Hoover Quick-N-Light Carpet Cleaner
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PaulaB 2012-07-26 for
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Understanding How a GPS Sat Nav Device Works
not cohesive, wrong key word used, hard to understand
Responded with comment: sorry and we will try harder
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erikap 2012-07-24
Thank you for your submission. Unfortunately, we are looking for a different writing style. The article really needs to sound like it has been written by a boater otherwise it can come across in a condescending way.
Not a well written article.
Responded with comment: we will work on it