sorry, but there are too many grammar mistakes and the article is not easy to read. 

I'm sorry my friend but this not written well. The title did not catch my interest and it didn't get any better as I read the text. Also I feel the layout is wrong. If you re-write this with improved grammar and layout I will probably take it. Thank 

Very bad english 

Last sentence does not contain the keyword. I am taking the article, but please next time double check requirements. Having the keyword on the last sentence is something google will search for. 

very good article very well written 

Article was well researched. Had some gramer issues. 

Sorry, there are too many grammar and punctuation mistakes for me to accept.