Article seems to be spun web content. Sentences are too long, try to keep sentences not more than 25 words. This way they will not loss their meaning. Thanks for submiting. 

Sorry, focus on the core issue is missing. Lot of filler talk. 

not written very well and does not make sense 

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this article is not written very well and is hard to read. the grammar needs work. 

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Very well done, thanks 

ok 

good 

mistakes here 

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ok 

ok 

need in paragraphs ..not bullets 

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not written well 

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need it in simple paragraphs 

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Sorry, You did not use all the keywords. Grammar and use of english is barely passable. I would have to more or less rewrite the whole article to make it useable. 

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Not good enough quality 

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Needs some work on english and grammar 

 

Top-notch article! 

Very nice. 

Thank you 

Good Job! 

 

Fantastic article! Your flow is definately admirable to say the least. Thanks for staying on topic which makes my job easy. Again, thank you for your input. 

more paragraph pls 

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