thanks! 

 

need some editing, but can definitely use it. so thanks! 

im sorry, not the flow of content I expect. i'll give you 3 stars for the effort. 

 

 

bad grammar 

Responded with comment: ok 

 

Good content, but with errors. Pay attention to making sentences shorter and using punctuation correctly and more often. 

This is borderline. You'll have to take more care with your sentence construction as parts of the article reads very clumsily. Also focus more on expanding on specifics instead of just saying "and so on". 

Responded with comment: thnx 

A few errors and a clumsy sentence here or there. Not perfect but okay for the price. 

This article had original ideas, and was well writeen. 

Perfect. Thanks! 

Misspellings, poor sentence structure. 

Responded with comment: ok 

The article flows well, and naturally, with good transitions from one concept to the next.
The article is a little "light" on content about how to make money online. Excellent opening paragraph describing current economic conditions. 

just what I wanted Thanks 

 

Thank you 

Thanks for the article 

Thanks 

Thanks 

Great article! Thank you very much. 

Good work 

OK!