bad grammar
Responded with comment: ok
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iwzone 2011-11-10
Good content, but with errors. Pay attention to making sentences shorter and using punctuation correctly and more often.
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iwzone 2011-11-10
This is borderline. You'll have to take more care with your sentence construction as parts of the article reads very clumsily. Also focus more on expanding on specifics instead of just saying "and so on".
Responded with comment: thnx
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iwzone 2011-11-10
A few errors and a clumsy sentence here or there. Not perfect but okay for the price.
This article had original ideas, and was well writeen.
Perfect. Thanks!
Misspellings, poor sentence structure.
Responded with comment: ok