There were a few grammar errors/typos, but for the most part a good article. 

Repetitive in parts 

good articles 

Article not adhere to instructions 

great article 

It dosen't really flow or make sense. the workouts are not realistic or explained correctly. 

bad grammar 

failed to follow the instructions.. 

Bad English. 

Great Write. Thanx 

Thanks for the article 

Will work better. Great job. Will work more in the future. 

 

 

Did not submit recipe with healthy options as suggested on rewrite. 

Improve grammar and language - too many errors to list in the limited number of characters. There should have been more holistic solutions like diet that were important and got missed. Also... there should have been pain at the beginning -- I don't s 

needs to be in a friendly, informal tone 

Thanks. 

Great article thanks 

Good basic article. No grammar or spelling issues. Cheers! 

Does not accomplish the purpose of the article. Also filled with passive sentences. Passive sentences take up space, but do not give credibility. Needed a summary of the study, not the NCBI article, or the Newswise article. 

Outstanding Job I look forward to you doing more work for me 

Content is good but too many grammar/sentence structure errors. Sorry, Josh. 

Sorry mate. This article is unacceptable in almost every way. The writing is unintelligible, dull and mostly off topic. My readers would revolt if they were forced to sit through this. Too much work needs to be done to merit a re-write. Best of luck.